Commentor 1

1. All the three RFCs use a different date format then the one we have in the template (1/12/09 instead of Jan 2009).

2. The normative/ informative references are not distinguished.

3. Yonsook's Email address is missing a .com (mindspring instead of mindspring.com)

Specific comments:

I am not sure this is a major problem, but I feel the word "marry" is used quite frequently. :). Comes across very colloquial. The authors have used the word "combine" a couple of times too, so that may be a better way.